Original Story — Bare Botanical Tales 2 (Culver)
The concluding part of an original story by Culver.
PART TWO
Alf Mossmere,
senior steward at Steeplehurst Botanical Gardens, is part way through punishing
nineteen-year-old Lucy Valewood. Earlier he caught her picking a fritillary for
her flower-pressing collection, a serious breach of garden rules. Now he’s got
her in the education centre, well before opening time. Having already
hand-spanked the girl, he’s about to give her a birching.
No resemblance
between fictional characters or settings and actual persons or places is
intended or should be inferred.
3rd August (continued)
Conspicuous in the sunlit room was a giant,
stylised seed pod, its smooth, elliptical form carved from laminated timber and
finished with a satin sheen. It was partly exhibit, partly a functional seat
and partly a play object. Alf told Lucy to lie face down over it. He instructed
her to stretch right across the smooth surface and raise her bare bottom for
the birch, keeping her skirt hitched well above the waist. When she was in a
satisfactory position he tapped the twigs teasingly against her spank-tenderised
cheeks.
Then he took aim and struck, bringing the
birch into forceful, quivery impact against the underside of her buttocks.
Several stray twigs caught the backs of her thighs. Lucy gasped and cried,
overcome by a diffuse sensation of prickly pain which both outdid and inflamed
the sting of her earlier hand-spanking.
She arched her back and exhaled. Alf ordered
her to hold steady and to keep her behind sticking up. He again struck low, the
hissing smack of the birch igniting multiple sparks of pain around her bottom
crease. This time the stroke galvanised her into lewd jerking motions, as
though she was trying to shake away those sparks. The front of her thighs
churned against the satin-finished surface of the wooden pod.
Alf barked at her to keep still. He followed
up rapidly with two more strokes, the swishing birch now splatting squarely
across the topside of her buttocks. She shuddered and squealed, hating the
biting pain.
Alf admired his handwork for a moment and
grinned. The birch had left a fine tracery of weals, just like the tessellated
pattern of the misappropriated fritillary. He was energised by the poetic
justice of that, by the wretched girl’s suffering and the spectacle of her
scored and reddened buttocks. His excitement kept rigid the urgent erection
tenting the front of his trousers. He thrashed Lucy till she screeched for
mercy, then he thrashed her some more, for good measure.
When it was all over Lucy collapsed on the
floor, crying and clutching her bottom. Alf told her to stand up and pull
herself together. She slowly got to her feet and sobbed. For a moment he
contemplated pocketing her cream cotton panties, which at present remained
where he’d dropped them. He’d made satisfying use of Emily Larken’s over the
weekend, and he liked the idea of acquiring Lucy’s too. But this time he had a
different idea. He told her to put the panties back on. She did so, tottering
first on one foot and then on the other.
Lucy’s punishment had an unexpected epilogue
which made her shudder with horror and humiliation. Alf detached the fritillary
from her notebook and drew the loose petal from his pocket. Then he hoisted up
her skirt again, spun her round so that she had her back to him, grabbed her by
the waist and stuffed the plant material inside her panties, poking it firmly
between her birch-scratched buttocks. He breathed heavily, his lips foraging
through her wavy chestnut hair to find her ear. ‘Here’s your flower back! Let’s
give it a good pressing, shall we?’
Alf withdrew his hand from Lucy’s panties
then slowly kneaded her bottom through the cotton to keep the pieces of broken
fritillary in a snug, warm place. His questing fingers drew residual moisture
from the petal, leaving a purple stain in the dip of her cream underwear.
Alf chuckled sadistically, then drew back his hand and gave Lucy’s punished seat a final, resounding smack. Only then did he allow her to remove the floral remains, claim back her pass, satchel and notebook, and go wet-eyed on her rueful way, lesson learnt.
10th August
Becky Fernley would get her A-level results
in just a few days. If all went well she would leave for university in the
autumn to study zoology. The eighteen-year-old had spent much of her summer so
far having anxious chats with friends about grades and university offers, as if
she believed that intense speculation might somehow influence outcomes.
Happily, Steeplehurst Botanical Gardens offered her respite from the stress of
awaiting results, especially since she happened to be an avid birdwatcher.
Becky loved birding. What had begun years
before as a fascination with blue tits nesting in a box in her back garden had
grown into a dedicated pastime. She had developed a habit of looking upwards
almost as instinctively as other people looked ahead. And the botanical gardens
supported remarkably rich birdlife…
Becky arrived at Cedar Gate a little after
eight o’clock. The attendant blearily scanned her 18-21s pass and handed it
back with a folded map. Becky glanced at the regulations printed on the
reverse. ‘Visitors are required to remain outside roped conservation areas.
Climbing trees is prohibited. Nesting birds and other wildlife are not to be
disturbed.’ She nodded to herself. Those were all rules with which she agreed.
Becky was a pretty girl who was used to
turning heads (excepting the sleepy attendant’s). Her dark, almond eyes, small
straight nose and softly shaped mouth combined to give her face a youthful,
natural openness. Her glossy dark hair complemented her olive complexion
perfectly. It was cut just below her jaw in an uncomplicated style, parted
neatly in the middle and tucked behind her ears before curving gently towards
her neck.
She wore a fitted cotton crop top with a wide
neckline and short cap sleeves. The soft white fabric sat close against her
shoulders, hugged her pert breasts and left a strip of sun-browned skin visible
above the waistband of her shorts. The shorts were of faded denim. She’d cut
them as high as she possibly could, from frayed old jeans, mischievously aware
that they’d bare the tight under-cheeks of her bottom for all and sundry to
gawp at. ‘It’s the fashion,’ she’d shrug, whenever her stepfather raised a
reproachful eyebrow.
Becky was certainly well equipped. Binoculars
hung from one shoulder, while a canvas field bag against her hip contained a
bird guidebook, a camera fitted with a telephoto lens and a bottle of water.
Before she had taken twenty steps she’d
caught sight of a great spotted woodpecker flying across the avenue. Further
along she paused to observe a blackcap singing in a yew hedge, and she smiled
as two goldfinches skimmed across the Mediterranean planting. But there was one
species in particular that she’d love to locate…
The possibility of seeing nuthatches in the
gardens had been suggested to Becky the previous week by another regular
visitor, Mrs Hamberley-Bower, a rather grand lady in her forties who had
spontaneously struck up a conversation with the aspiring young zoologist in the
café and professed her own interest in spotting birds.
Mrs Hamberley-Bower had expertly discoursed on nuthatches while refusing, with mock severity, to reveal the precise location of the nest in the gardens. ‘Half the pleasure,’ she had declared over the rim of her china teacup, ‘is in making the discovery yourself.’ Before they’d parted she’d offered Becky a clue, remarking that nuthatches favoured veteran oaks. She’d given the girl a long, speculative look, adding that she hoped to see her again soon. Becky had felt unnerved for reasons she couldn’t pinpoint at the time.
Recalling that encounter and Mrs
Hamberley-Bower’s words, Becky left the principal avenue for a lane leading to
the gardens’ Sylvan Walk. She stopped to listen beneath some mature beeches.
Nothing as yet. But nuthatches seldom kept quiet for long, and their
distinctive notes travelled well.
Becky turned from the lane to a narrow path.
At last, a sharp, ringing call came from somewhere ahead. Another answered from
deeper among the trees. This was the sound she’d been hoping to hear.
A flicker of movement caught her eye. An
adult nuthatch landed sideways on the trunk of a broad oak, carrying a green
caterpillar in its beak. It paused for a second, then disappeared around the
far side.
Becky lifted her binoculars. When the bird
reappeared its beak was empty. The nest had to be hidden somewhere in the bark.
She watched without moving. Within a minute the bird returned with another
caterpillar, vanishing again behind the same lateral branch. Several more
journeys followed the same pattern.
Becky noticed that the oak stood inside one
of the gardens’ roped conservation enclosures. She appreciated why. The
enclosure protected the root zone from countless footsteps that would otherwise
compact the soil.
She adjusted her binoculars. From the pathway
she was able to follow every approach the bird made to the nest. Frustratingly,
however, the enclosure prevented her from completing the final few feet; the
cavity remained hidden.
Becky briefly looked around. The nearest
gardener was pruning roses on the far side of the avenue, screened by shrubs.
It would be remarkably easy to step over the rope and find that nest. Surely no
harm would come of it. She’d tread lightly, and of course she’d touch nothing…
The grass inside the enclosure felt softer
beneath her trainers. She advanced only a pace or two before stopping again.
Still she couldn’t see the nest entrance. Beside her the lowest branch
projected at little more than shoulder height, thick with age, deeply ridged
and broad enough to climb. It would obviously support her weight…
Becky rested her field bag against the trunk
and pulled herself onto the first branch. The bark felt dry and secure beneath
her hands. She climbed slowly. One foothold, then another. She reached the
broad lateral limb…
At last she saw the nest. It had been neatly
reduced with dried mud until only a small oval opening remained, scarcely
larger than the birds themselves. Suddenly a shadow crossed her vision.
The adult nuthatch approached, carrying
another caterpillar, but instead of entering the nest it landed several feet
away and froze, flattening its body against the bark. It dropped the
caterpillar and emitted a sharp cry, announcing to its mate the presence of a
predator. The other adult answered immediately.
That was enough to trigger a general alarm. Sylvan Walk came instantly alive with a chorus of avian commotion. A blackbird erupted into loud, indignant scolding from a nearby hawthorn. A robin began ticking furiously from the undergrowth below. A wood pigeon exploded upwards with a clatter of wings. A jay swept across the canopy with a harsh, rasping squawk. Blue tits materialised almost from nowhere, flicking agitatedly through the outer branches, while a wren burst into rapid notes from somewhere near the roots of the tree.
Becky stared at the nuthatch.
‘I’m sorry,’ she said.
The bird didn’t move.
Crestfallen, Becky climbed down, more
carefully than she had climbed up. She retrieved her field bag and crossed back
over the rope. The alarm calls continued, subsiding only after she had moved
clear of the enclosure. And then, beneath the last anxious chatter of the
birds, came the quiet hum of an electric motor.
The utility buggy rolled to a halt.
‘What have we here, Harriet? Looks like a
brazen case of tree-climbing! What a disturbance!’
Alf Mossmere was addressing his passenger,
none other than Mrs Hamberley-Bower.
‘Oddly enough,’ she replied, ‘this girl is
recently of my acquaintance. And I’ve a shrewd idea what she’s been up to!’
Alf knew Mrs Hamberley-Bower well, better
than most. It so happened that he moonlighted as her consultant gardener,
briefing and sometimes helping out a motley band of lads who tended the
extensive grounds of the mansion she inhabited alone up at Steeplehurst Magna.
But there was more to their relationship than met the eye.
Several years before, Alf had discovered Mrs Hamberley-Bower’s ‘open secret’: she had a deeply ingrained interest in spanking female bottoms! She continually leveraged her connections and influence in Steeplehurst, asserting the status and authority she needed to summon to the Big House adult young women of the area who ‘deserved’ corporal punishment. These included light-fingered check-out girls, flighty ‘selfie’ posters addicted to social media, spendthrift fiancées and farmers’ daughters who didn’t pull their weight. Hairbrush spankings, tawsings and canings were the order of the day. All in the name of traditional discipline. Yet anyone ‘in the know’ inferred her sadistic motivations, and it was salient that she seemed only ever to summon prettier miscreants.
Alf had long since crossed the socially risky
threshold of confiding in Mrs Hamberley-Bower that he shared her peccadilloes.
Thereafter the unlikely pair had developed an unconventional bond. One thing
had led to another, even to the point of negotiating occasional collaboration
in administering bare-bottom punishments up at the Hall.
Since Mrs Hamberley-Bower’s other great
enthusiasms were birding and visiting the botanical gardens, Alf frequently
offered her complimentary morning jaunts in his buggy. Just minutes before, he’d
been telling his no-nonsense passenger about his recent dealings with Emily
Larken and Lucy Valewood. She had expressed her hearty approval of the strict
measures he’d taken in those cases, surprised only that she’d never crossed
paths with either girl herself.
The confused young Becky was naturally
oblivious to all of this. Her own world was circumscribed by the typical
interests of a teen gearing up for ‘uni’ and, of course, by birding. But she
was well aware that she’d landed herself in a spot of trouble here.
‘I literally wasn’t going to touch that nest!’
‘Maybe not,’ Alf retorted, ‘but you’ve broken
garden rules. You’ve breached a perimeter, climbed a tree and prevented a bird
from feeding its young. The only question now is what we’re to do about it.’
In her ignorance Becky hoped for at least
some support from Mrs Hamberley-Bower. The woman had seemed friendly enough
over that cup of tea the previous week, and she’d even encouraged her to find
the nest. But no help was forthcoming. Far from it. Becky could hardly believe
her ears when Mrs Hamberley-Bower spoke again.
‘Don’t beat about the bush, Alfred. The girl
clearly needs to be thrashed. Make a similar ultimatum to the one you gave
those other flagrant rule-breakers. Put it to her that her membership of the
gardens will be cancelled, and her pass confiscated and binned, unless she
agrees to submit to summary corporal punishment!’
Alf duly explained to Becky these limited
options.
Becky was in a head-spinning quandary. Her
right to visit the gardens meant a lot to her. But was it worth it to… what…?
accept a ‘thrashing’…? and from people like these…? She took a minute. Against
her better judgement she signalled agreement to Alf’s terms, but with something
of a bratty attitude.
‘Okay, okay, okay-ah! Whatever!’
Mrs Hamberley-Bower surveyed Becky with
disdain. She continued to address Alf over the girl’s head. Not once had she
spoken to her directly.
‘Then it’s settled. I have half a mind to
drive us all to the Old Hall at once. We could easily punish her there, and
take our time about it in comfort. But you’re still on duty, Alfred, and
presumably you need to remain here in the gardens. Frankly, I’m itching to
chastise her as soon as possible, as doubtless you are too. Hmm. A thought
occurs to me. Isn’t your private potting shed nearby? How well equipped is it?’
Alf understood the implication of those
questions.
‘Good idea, Harriet! My shed’s only a
three-minute ride away and completely private; gardeners and the other stewards
need my express permission to use it. And yes, I’ve got exactly what we need
there. Shall we go?’
Alf had left in his potting shed the birch he’d
used on Lucy. He was soaking it in a jug of cider vinegar and would rather let
it rest it for now. But an ideal alternative was available. Bolstered by his
recent experiences, he’d reinforced his arsenal that weekend, acquiring at a
flea market a couple of crook-handled school canes which he’d carried to the
shed in his hessian sack. He’d taken them out and propped them up in a corner,
next to the bamboo he used to support saplings. Now he thanked himself for
having again been proactive!
Since Alf’s utility buggy was fitted with
only one passenger seat, it was decided that Becky would have to plant her
barely-clad derrière on the older woman’s lap for the bumpy ride to the shed.
On the way, Alf couldn’t help noticing, with a salacious grin, how his
companion allowed her elegant hand to drift between Becky’s upper thighs,
stroking them at the hems of the denim shorts and squeezing the exposed smooth
flesh. For her part, Becky, wincing, had to wonder whether her molester had
fewer qualms than she did about ‘touching nests’! Before long, Mrs
Hamberley-Bower was reaching into Becky’s cotton top, tweaking and pinching her
breasts. The woman muttered something in her ear about how much she was looking
forward to making her suffer.
Alf parked the buggy beside a narrow service
gate screened by clipped hornbeam. A flustered Becky climbed out, leaving her
bag and binoculars behind, and she and Mrs Hamberley-Bower accompanied the
senior steward through the gate. They were now in a restricted horticultural
area. Nursery beds stretched between gravel tracks, young trees stood in
ordered ranks, and propagation tunnels sheltered plants awaiting their place in
the collections. Mrs Hamberley-Bower seized Becky sharply by the ear and tugged
her along the central path, ignoring the girl’s yelping cries of protest.
‘Owww! Owww-ah!’
The potting shed stood beneath a weathered
slate roof, its cedar cladding silvered with age. The shed was spacious inside,
nothing like the claustrophobic interior one might have imagined. A broad oak
bench filled the centre, darkened by years of compost spillage. Heated tables
held trays of cuttings beneath a fine mist, while seedlings stood in labelled
rows. Shelves carried pots, specialist tools and varieties of compost. The air
smelled of loam.
Mrs Hamberley-Bower instantly spotted the two
crook-handled canes in the corner. She let go of Becky’s ear and picked up the
whippy implements, retaining one for herself and handing the other to Alf.
Meanwhile, Alf ordered Becky to remove her trainers, shorts and knickers, and
to lean over the end of the bench. He barked at her to be quick about it, too!
The girl complied, albeit sulkily and with much huffing.
A few months before, Mrs Hamberley-Bower had
invited Alf to the Old Hall to team up with her in caning another girl, a
fulsome upper-sixth blonde referred to her by a local headmaster for having
failed her Oxbridge entrance exam. On that occasion the lady of the manor and
her excited guest/ employee/ friend had made a success of inflicting their
first double caning, becoming familiar with each other’s style and technique in
the process. They felt they could now repeat a performance without much need
for verbal negotiation. Like the blubbering blonde of before, Becky would get
six strokes from each, to be delivered alternately.
The two disciplinarians assumed their
positions. They stood either side of Becky and made the girl endure a
nerve-wracking wait for the inevitable. They took their time to perfect their
stances, flexed their right arms and gauged optimal angles of descent. Becky
flinched at the whistling of their practice cuts in the humid air.
Alf was the first to strike. After a couple of taps he drew back his arm and delivered an initial stroke of considerable force, dead centre across the girl’s buttocks, his introduction of cane-bearing pain landing without any concession whatsoever to her likely inexperience. Becky cried out with the shock of it. Her defensive brattiness evaporated at once and she wailed desperately.
Mrs Hamberley-Bower followed up with a
vicious opener of her own, denying the girl any recovery time and leaving a
scarlet stripe just below the livid weal inflicted by her consultant gardener.
Becky’s two chastisers exchanged glances,
inspired by their shared arousal at the girl’s distress. Each knew what to do
next. The idea was to alternate three more strokes of their own with three by
their partner, and to do so with such rapidity that the wretched recipient
would experience the six in a continuous blaze of pain. It was the phase of the
punishment requiring most skill: they’d need to avoid ‘cane clash’. Alf
initiated the quickfire sequence on the count of three and both executed their
parts flawlessly. Becky cried in excruciating pain as a sextet of angry weals
traversed the first two stripes almost instantaneously.
After a brief pause for mutual
congratulations Alf and Mrs Hamberley-Bower set about the remainder of their
task with renewed cruelty. Alf landed a wickedly well-aimed stroke in the
crease of Becky’s bottom; Mrs Hamberley-Bower hit lower still, striking the
underside tops of the girl’s thighs. Becky convulsed and shrieked in agony.
A couple more strokes were needed to complete
the dozen and neither disciplinarian was in the mood for mercy. Swish,
crack! Swish, crack! The coup de grâce left Becky with a perfectly
symmetrical cross shape of two intersecting stripes layered over the matrix of
other fresh weals.
Becky wept profusely. The caning was over now and nothing mattered more to her than permission to stand up and rub her ravaged bottom. It took her a good few minutes to recover her wits and think about getting dressed. Easing herself back into her shorts was extremely difficult given their tightness and the dreadful ache of throbbing pain in her rear. She wouldn’t be able to wear them again for at least a couple of weeks; the tramlines on her under-cheeks and thighs would provoke unwanted questions from her stepfather, friends and her headmaster on A-Level results day. She’d have to make do with knee-length skirts instead. As it was, getting home and scurrying unseen to her bedroom would be awkward enough.
As she’d started to dress there’d been an
added humiliation: she’d been denied her knickers.
‘I can tell you’d like to keep her underwear,
Alfred,’ Mrs Hamberley-Bower had observed, pointedly. ‘Please don’t be shy on
my account.’
Before Becky left the couple to themselves
Mrs Hamberley-Bower addressed her for the first and only time that morning.
‘As for you, young lady, you are cordially
invited to the Old Hall for tea and cucumber sandwiches next Monday afternoon,
punctually at four o’clock. Do not be late!’
A sullen, grimacing Becky looked up as she made her way along the path towards the buggy to collect her field bag and binoculars. The pair of adult nuthatches circled overhead, squawking exultantly, as if flying a victory lap.









Bare Botanicals: echoes of Shakespeare's Rude Mechanicals- Bottom was in that too.
ReplyDeleteAs for those tarty little denim shorts. Yes they're everywhere These chavvy girls in them should be made to line up at caning points where their shorts are confiscated, and they should dealt with on the spot.
(I laughed out loud when she said 'literally', it's the longest word these teenage girls know, and they haven't a clue how to use it
I'm glad you picked up on Becky's irritatingly fashionable use of "literally". In Part 1 I gave Emily a similarly modish idiomatic moment when she presages a response to Alf with, "Wait, ..." - CC
DeleteFantastic work, Colin - both text and illustrations. I loved the anticipatory build up of each girl being tempted into rule-breaking actions they initially disapproved of, together with the pleasing certainty of Alf appearing on the scene at the crucial moment, an event wonderfully presaged by the low hum of his arriving buggy.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you appreciated the spanking magazine connections. My favourite costume for Janus's Natalie (Becky, in my story) is in #133 - crop top and denim shorts. I thought that this outfit would suit Becky as a kind of cartoon character getting into comic scrapes, and it was fun manipulating AI into illustrating her like that. Also, I originally intended just a short cameo for my Mrs Hanbury-Boyce surrogate in Part 2, but her role grew to become Alf's sadistic senior partner. Mrs Hanbury-Boyce was, of course, part of Janus lore over a long period, so I wanted to tribute her properly. But for the description of the double caning I drew inspiration from 'Polly's Punishments' in earlier Janus.
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