The Village Hall
Story from Blushes 1
The village hall, a wooden building once central to the
geography and the needs of the community eighty years before, is now a
dilapidated relic left behind by the developments that have taken place around
it. It stands alone on an ill-tended plot of land opposite the church and
backing on to the George and Dragon, from which it is divided by an ivy-grown
fence. At either end its doors are locked and through its dusty windows little
of the interior is to be seen in the gathering dusk. On the ridge of the sharply
sloped roof a pigeon struts perkily and dips its head to peck at something
under a dislodged tile. From a single narrow window, high up under the angle of
the peak which confronts the back of the pub, a chink of light shows briefly
before it winks out. The pigeon loses interest in whatever is under the loose
tile and flaps away to its roost, while high above an aeroplane traces its path
across the deepening blue of the evening sky. Leaning against the fence behind
the hall, a bicycle collects the misty dampness with which the air is laden; a
sticker on the saddlebag reads ‘2nd Brackley —’, with the last word scuffed to
the point of illegibility. From the roadway the bicycle would be completely
hidden.
Inside, the hall is simply a large room, with two doors at
the end opposite the main entrance. One of the doors leads to a kitchen, the
other to a washroom and lavatory. In the ceiling of the washroom there is a
large rectangular hatch, and beneath it stands a rickety wooden step ladder.
The hatch is not quite closed, and through the gap comes a shaft of light.
In the storage space above the ceiling, cluttered as it is
with canvas bags and tent poles and all the paraphernalia of camping
expeditions, a storm lantern standing on a packing case illuminates the
slope-sided claustrophobia of the loft. Shadows slant across the inward-sloping
walls on either hand, but the lantern’s light reaches into a corner and touches
the spread-eagled thighs of a prostrate, fair-haired girl. The summer-holiday
tan of her legs glows warmly in the yellow lamp-light and the bare skin looks
satiny smooth and inviting to the touch.
The girl is spread out on her back; from moment to moment
her parted thighs shift this way and that, drawing nervously together by an
inch or so then drifting apart again with trembling reluctance, as if
struggling against the urge to slam tightly together for the sake of outraged
modesty.
As her naked, uncertain thighs nudge fitfully this way and
that, so her white-stockinged heels shove spasmodically into the folds of a
grubby old blanket and then snatch back again, these little involuntary jerks
alternating with the timid wriggles, the tremulous lifts and twitches and
plump, soft bounces of her bare bottom as it squirms against the roughness of
the blanket. With each push of her feet amongst the rumpled blanket’s folds, a
loosely-clinging ruck of dark navy blue is dragged to and fro, sideways and
back again, as the ankle around which her abandoned knickers are still looped
drags them erratically about after it.
With each snatching, jerky movement of the forgotten
knickers, breathless little whimpers whisper into the shadows; the girl’s eyes
open wide and then squeeze shut again as she protests timidly and without hope
that her pleas will he heard. In the shallow pool of shadow at the bottom of
her bare belly, fat, clumsy fingers nuzzle urgently, probing, stroking, nipping
and nudging and sliding confidently between, making the girl whisper meekly ‘No
— please, no —’ as she rolls her soft, round bottom lewdly against the blanket.
Teased unmercifully she worms her plump pubic mound against the interloping
fingertips, her crinkly hair brushes crisply across the hand’s knuckles and she
pants and heaves her hips and is so, so close to it — within a wriggle and a
gasp of disgracing herself completely.
‘Come on now — come on!’
‘No, please don’t —!’ But she shudders and squirms
helplessly and lifts her bottom from the blanket as her back arches and her
loins thrust up to bunt against the teasing fingers. A second hand slips
underneath her and cups the trembly bum-cheeks, fingers careless of the hot,
curving weals which underline the roundness of the buttocks.
‘Come on — come on now!’
The girl gasps several times in rapid succession, and then
goes limp and subsides back onto the blanket. She covers her face with her hands
and draws her knees up as the hand slides away from between her thighs.
Strangled little sobs sound strangely in the semi-darkness.
The kneeling man hoists himself to his feet, his shadow
passing across the girl’s half-naked body as he steps away from her. He is
heavily built, with a paunch that considerably overlaps the waistband of his
trousers. He turns aside and fishes a packet of cigarettes from the pocket of
his discarded jacket. Bluish smoke floats in the air as he looks down at the
exhausted girl.
‘Get up.’ He says it mildly enough, but his gruff voice
startles the girl. She takes her hands from her face and looks nervously up at
him.
‘It’s nearly nine o’clock.’
She scrambles up, inelegant, clumsy, acutely embarrassed
by her semi-nakedness. She stands on the blanket, her hair touched by the
lamp-light, tears bright on the rosiness of her flushed cheeks. Her blouse is
creased, a badge has come loose and flaps down from her sleeve, the flash at
her shoulder — Rangers — picks up the same light that is in her hair She is
naked from the waist down, except for her socks, which are smudged with dirt at
the heels. Her knickers still trail from her ankle, forlorn in the dust. She
keeps her knees pressed together, the little upside-down triangle of hair at
the base of her belly snuggles down between the tops of her thighs as if trying
to escape attention, while her bottom hides itself self-consciously behind her.
Her eyes refuse to rise from the floor even when he speaks to her.
‘Pull your knickers up then. It’s time you were gone.’
She stoops and hops on one leg as she tries to put her
foot back into her pants. She pulls them up, turning a little aside as she does
so, the navy blue material stretching around her hips and close up between her
legs. She steps from the blanket and slips her feet into her shoes, and then
turns her back as she looks round for her skirt. Her knickers are streaked with
dust marks, and the tenderness of her punished buttocks spills out in hot
crimson blotches and sensitive-looking cane marks from under the elastic
curving up diagonally across either cheek. She finds her skirt on top of a pile
of folded groundsheets but before she can put it on the gruff voice makes her
jump again.
‘Come here.’
She obeys, though timorously, and turns to present her
bottom when told to. He brushes at the dust on her knickers but his
heavy-handedness on her sore buttocks makes her swerve her bum away. He slaps
her thoughtlessly on one plump cheek.
‘You look a mess. You’d better tidy yourself up before
someone wants to know what you’ve been up to.’
She tugs mechanically at her cuffs and pushes her hair
back out of her eyes. She still looks a mess. The tear streaks on her cheeks
are very obvious, but it’s almost dark now and probably no-one will see her.
She’ll have to do as she is.
‘Run along then.’
She steps into her skirt and fastens its short pleats
around her hips, then shuffles over to the hatch in the floor, her eyes
anxious. He precedes her down the stepladder then stands at the bottom while
she climbs unsteadily down, a hand against the back of her legs sliding up
under her skirt as she reaches the floor. He pats her nervous bottom, feeling
its warmth against the palm of his hand, then goes to let her out of the back
door. He sends her on her way with a farewell squeeze of her buttocks that
makes her flinch from the contact, then she pulls her bike away from the fence
and wheels it around the angle of the building.
The man waits while the sound of her feet on the cinder path fades away, then waits a little longer for discretion’s sake. At length he locks the door from inside and walks the length of the hall in the darkness. Standing back from the window beside the main entrance he watches to see whether there is anyone to note his exit. Across the road, at the vicarage, he thinks he catches sight of a face at an upstairs window. He waits, but there is no further sign that there is anyone to see him leave. He slips out into the night and locks the door quietly, then walks away along the road.
Just love these classic stories. The detailed descriptive paragraphs, gradually building the atmosphere; a seemingly normal setting but, this being Blushes, we know, or at least hope there will be something to savour. We are not dissappointed, the excitement begins at last: "...the lantern’s light reaches into a corner and touches the spread-eagled thighs of a prostrate, fair-haired girl..."
ReplyDeleteThere is the delicious accompanying illustration also which, like the text, I presume to be the work of the redoubtable Alan Bell. It very nicely complements the text with its depiction of the caning which has taken place immediately prior to the actions described.
DeleteI am strongly reminded of another excellent story - The Loft (Uniform Girls 17). A similar setting of the loft of a village hall (and one in a similarly dilapidated state) and a 'girl ranger' being given some 'tension relief' after punishment from the gentleman 'Head Ranger', although in the latter story's case it's after a spanking rather than the cane. I can't help but think 'The Loft' was inspired by 'The Village Hall' actually. It's a great story, one of my favourites. I think it edges it over this one just because there's more of a story to it and the whole thing is narrated via the prism of the young lady's own helplessness. There's a terrific little pay off at the end also. It is also accompanied by a fantastic photo set, featuring one of Blushes' choicest young lovelies.
Yes, a lovely title illustration. In a way it makes the story a little unexpected because it doesn't cover the same action, but that story gives us an extra to what is shown, an after-caning bonus, one could say.
DeleteThere have been a few 'loft' stories - I can't recall that one in UG17 in particular, so would be nice to see it on the blog in due course. The loft as a setting fits nicely in that shady world just beneath (or above?) the surface of respectable normality, convenient, yet rather difficult to access for the uninvited, and lacking windows there is no danger that a gentleman's vicarious pastimes will be observed.
Sounds like that might call for a Thursday "special" next week...
DeleteYou are too kind, Mr Evans! I shall look forward to it with great anticipation.
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